Student Feedback
Student Name / Number: Mitul Kamleshkumar Patel
Thank you for submitting your work to be assessed for this unit. Your work has been assessed
against the grading criteria on the assessment brief, graded and internally moderated. In
consultation with the subject area specialists, feedback has been split into the 4 main subject
areas.
The feedback comments below are designed to help you improve by identifying both the strengths
of your work and areas for further development. You may find it useful to reflect on any other
feedback you have received from other assignments to see if there are common themes that keep
coming up in your feedback.
People
No dedicated PM section. Assignment requirement not then met. No Pm practices identified or
analysed.
Finance
limited understanding no real or clear analysis
Operations
Some relevant background information and SWOT/PESTLE analysis on Tata has been provided The
presentation content is very superficial and descriptive
An inadequate number of operations management practices have been identified
An inadequate level of operations management theory has been discussed in the context of
external and internal influences, and there is insufficient critical analysis and application of
theory
The business strategy is not adequately discussed in terms of the influence on operations
management
There are no recommendations
The references do not include sufficient academic sources
Marketing
You have mentioned the marketing mix and made a few observations about the company in this
regard. You need to explain on the marketing mix to evaluate the business and present your key
findings (i.e. areas for improvement). The external influences need to be linked more specifically
to decision making in the different areas of management, including marketing.
Final Comments
The SWOT analysis is an appropriate tool for analysing the business. Consider presention the main
findings in the context of the 4 areas of management.
Grade: F3
Your grade, which is shown above, is subject to ratification by an exam board and external
moderation. I hope that you will find these feedback comments to be constructive and that they
will help you to develop further in the future.
Kind regards,
Tim Jackson
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